Jessmo1>> NO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Wha????
NO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! NAY!!!!!!! NEVER!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I don't wanna go back! I don't wanna go back! I don't wanna go back! Not yet anyway!
School starts again in like a week, and I didn't get nearly as much writing done as I thought I would this summer... which really sucks! I wanted to get a lot done but all that I did was maybe eight chapters. When school starts I wonder how much time I'll get to work on Fire in the Stars. Probably not much, but we'll see. Hopefully there won't be too much homework.
Oh yeah, here's an update. I'm now in Chapter 16: Fly Away Home, nearing the very end of it. My main characters will be leaving the city of Impon (refer to last long update) and all the imps they met behind and returning to the Dwelling to continue the rebellion against Difowe. Eliza knows more about her powers than she ever did and Impon has the possibility to be resurrected to the surface. All is well, except... Eliza must be very careful (oh, how she is getting tired of hearing that) because the Cyrix, (the necklace she wears around her neck) is the link to her source of power. Without the necklace she can't survive. If she loses it she will slowly fade away into death. Also, Eliza finds that there could be others who will try to take the Cyrix from her for their own use. Talk about problems!
Eliza is beginning to find that everything has some sort of difficulty, but will the help of Jason, her warrior and Protector, and the help of the Cyrix get her through every trial? She has to pray for it.
Hehehehehehehehhehe..... Chapter 17 is going to be very interesting.... for it leads into Eliza's greatest trial to come... The Forests of Firebracken, Noria's southern-most region, are calling for her, and griffin poison is calling to take Jason's life away from him and to leave Eliza alone with her heart shattered. Pray that the Norian Gods, Diyren Rouna and Sial Hiya, will smile down on her. Every step is a treacherous one for the Chosen.
The Forbidden Forest (I have yet to come up with a better name for it) of Firebracken is full of dangers and monsters guarding the old hag, Cirella, who has the healing Rose crystals. Eliza must get the healing crystals from Cirella in order to save Jason from the griffin poison. The dangers of the forest range from Cilc the Spider, to Marun the giant snake, to the Night-mare which feasts on its opponent's greatest fears, to Bivcad the earth dragon, to Cirella the hag herself... who happens to know of the powers of the Cyrix... uh oh.... Eliza must surpass all of these creatures and more in order to save her love... but the odds are against her, for there has never been one creature known to leave the Forbidden Forests who once entered them. But her chances are even more slimmed for Difowe will do his best to make sure that the Chosen, his greatest enemy, never returns to the Crystal Forest again.
If people will give some opinions or COMMENTS about this scenario... maybe Eliza will survive to meet another adventure.... maybe, or maybe she'll be written off the pages of time and history by Difowe in his wicked and malicious attacks against her. OR... maybe she'll fall to her death by being sucked down by the Black sand... an extremely dangerous type of quicksand. OR... maybe the Black Fog, a sinister monster of the mists will swallow her into his dark fog. I dunno... or even maybe, maybe Cirella the hag will get the better of her and take the Cyrix away from her... bringing the very end of Noria itself...
COMMENT! And I'll tell you what happens! I know you want to know just what happens! Come on! I know you do! You know you want to! Come on! Please? Comment? Will ya, please? Don't make me beg....... COMMENT GOD DAMMIT!!!! I ONLY HAVE SO MUCH PATIENCE!!!!! C...O...M...M...E...N...T!!!!!!!! Oh, for all the Stars...
To be continued....
Stay tuned for the next adventure in Fire in the Stars, showing monday through friday at 5 o'clock.
Hehehe... T.V. humour, I guess.
See ya'll,
arrrr, mateys... sheen-sheen
P.S.>> oh, for those who are wondering... I'm trying to make my entry longer than Jesmo2's last one with the convo with Kristyn and Melissa. Do you think I did it? COMMENT!
P.P.S.or P.S.S. (w/e it is) >> please comment, Jessmo 2 and I want to know exactly who goes on our website... we're very interested.... cause we wonder who is strange enough like us to go and read this stuff! There are prizes included! well... not really... meh....
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